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glockgal, You demanded, so I complied.
Is this the format you wanted? A Victorian Christmas

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paperdollkisses
Jan. 12th, 2009 08:12 am (UTC)
That was freaking awesome! I absolutely LOVE the tone and the realism. The speech and the words and the...

Just...

I can't even describe my glee coherently.

It was beautiful.
chootoy
Jan. 13th, 2009 01:59 am (UTC)
OMG! Thank you! Good gosh! Thank you so much!
paperdollkisses
Jan. 13th, 2009 04:18 am (UTC)
You're so welcome. I just love that era of politeness and a detective and Christmas... *sigh* Happy place.
glockgal
Jan. 14th, 2009 03:31 am (UTC)
HURRZAYZ!

brushed away unseen lint

HEEE. UNSEEN LINT.

I'm here to pick up my order. You sent word round that it was ready.

I love the fact that I can hear him say that. I don't know why bu it sddenly gave me a clear image of his face and voice and EVERYTHING. I love when fic gives me images!

Also, I kinda love how he keeps repeating Mrs Tornelli's name. I find it really interesting and rather in character - like her name would be so unfamiliar and 'foreign' to him, that he's just keep saying it for the pleasure of saying an unconventional name. *hee*

“Murdoch,” he said instead, “ “Detective” Murdoch.” he added with more weight

AHAHAHAH OH MURDOCH. Such a snob. LOL you know if he was a Doctor he'd be throwing that around too!

A moment of silence hung uncomfortable between them before Dr. Ogden glanced down at the table and looked over at Murdoch.

FOFL ohhh man. I LOVE how awkward these two are around each other! It's so sweet. Also MMMM romance over pastries. *happy timez*

George gave him a little lopsided grin.

*MELTZ*

“That’s just the box, George. Your present is inside.

AHAH I can hear him saying that too! In all his prim, fond, exasperation.

His burly fingers snapped the twine like thread and tore the paper away like a youngster on Christmas morning.

HEEEE. Suddenly I can't WAIT for season two HOMG.

“Oh,” hesitated Brackenreid, running Catholic traditions through his head, “of course, of course.”

AHAHAH. omg brilliant. So very brilliant. What a great little detail to write.

Of course the only thing I'm left with is WHAT WERE THEIR GIFTS TO MURDOCH?! THAT SCALLYWAG!!!


YAYYYYYY ;skfhjksafhaskjf THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS. It was a WONDERFUL holiday gift!!!! <333333333333333333333333333333
chootoy
Jan. 14th, 2009 11:47 pm (UTC)
tee hee. I'm so glad you liked it. I'm thrilled at the things you picked to comment on. ::claps:: yay!

As for the presents, perhaps three short little stories could be told from the other characters' p.o.vs. What *did* Julia get William....You tell me? :o)

*acla%jfl*&&dan!!ek* Season Two --- WHERE ARE YOU!!!!!?????!!!!
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